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It flickers like candlelight,
Sparkling just long enough to draw you close.
Before the heat.
Then, like a clock, the burn.
You taste it, hear it lingering on his lips like a tune.
That lost promise with a hint of truth that you want so hard to believe.
You miss the step again as his hot breath caresses your cheek.
Flat.
Soft and warm and welcoming like the fruit’s flesh.
The tongue flickers and you almost turn back.
You slip away from him for breath.
But he speaks…
You perk with loss in that brevity of escape,
And the band snaps back.
Into his arms.
Into his lips.
Into his eyes.
Into his words.
Into his bed.
Fallen again.
Cut with the delicacy of a razor.
It won’t bleed now, but in a moment…
In that sweet, rapturous despondency when the sheets are cold,
And he’s gone.
The stain will remain.
©2007-2009 ~OH-mesa
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Here, new poem.. I know it's been a while.. ^^
-meg

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Thank you! I hope that was a compliment. XD

Thanks for at least reading it.
-meg

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-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconlockethehunter:
Don't worry, it was a compliment!

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I Rly Lk Fllng n Th Blnks
:iconoh-mesa:
Well, YAY! Thanks. ^^ :w00t:

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-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
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I already commented on this poem somewhere else, but I like it. I like how there's kind've a parallel between the tongue of flame and an actual tongue. Slightly overdone metaphor, but you've done it justice anyway. Luff!

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Superman? Here I am.
:iconoh-mesa:
Huh?

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-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconoh-mesa:
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Nice on Obi-wan... But actually that was a biblical reference to the forbidden fruit and the devil. That was the serpent's tongue. :nod: I win.

YAY!
I'm glad you like it though.. And thanks for the compliment. I wanna see some of your new stuff chiku.

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-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconagentl:
Ohrhgman. You really don't want to see my newer stuff, snrrk. It's crap.

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Superman? Here I am.
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I had fun reading it out loud 'cos it has a very interesting flow. XD

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I reject your reality and substitute my own!

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