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The Truth Be Told... by ~OH-mesa:iconOH-mesa:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


The Truth Be Told...

His eyes not as dead
His lips not a smooth.
No words to be said
and no hand to soothe.
If feeling is knowing, and knowledge is why
Then this pain is my wisdom. I’m going to die.

This warm silken satin that flows from my chest.
This icy cold steal that protrudes from my breast.

Across he stands with his hands dipped in crimson.
Behind him approaches his cackling vixen.

He drops to his knees
My blindness be damned.
Through her kisses he sees,
There’s a gun in her hand.

The clicking revolver, the bullet is set.
The tip of the gun and my temple are met.
With one little movement, and one tiny blast.
His now shining eyes are a thing of the past.

Just like the roses and the setting sun.
My heart lets me go, and my spirit is gone.
©2004-2009 ~OH-mesa
:iconoh-mesa:

Author's Comments

This is a very crazy.. creepy.. dark and morbid poem.

It was actually a nightmare I had about a guy I liked and this girlthat he was "in love with" that hated my guts. ^^;

Yesh I'm a loser, but i believe the poem is one of my better ones.


Writen by MEH!

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:iconlopmon:
~Lopmon Jul 16, 2004, 9:27:47 PM
:D very good:Dvery morbid xD
:iconfull-metal-kitty:
~Full-Metal-Kitty Jul 17, 2004, 4:21:13 PM
This is very good ^.^ And dark...
:iconoh-mesa:
~OH-mesa Jul 18, 2004, 3:34:43 AM
Why thank you! Just what I always wanted. *laughs*

:giggle: Yesh...very dark...:giggle:

--
-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconagentl:
~agentl Jul 18, 2004, 6:08:57 PM
Can I tell people I'm your mentor? Please? 'Cause I want to hop on your bandwagon to published works! That's friggin' excellent, kiddo! :glomp:

--
Superman? Here I am.
:iconoh-mesa:
~OH-mesa Jul 19, 2004, 5:54:32 PM
*laughs through happy tears* You are my mentor! You're the person I look up to L! I love everything you write, and I always show off your stuff before I even say that I write. Like one time somebody was looking through my portfolio and saw a copy of one of your poems, I think it was Pheonix or however yous pell it, and I swear I was talking to that person for an hour about all of your different works and how much they've inspired me.

You're the reason I wanted to become a writer in the first place, L. It was because of everything I'd ever read by you it amazed me the way the words worked together, and ran like water completely smooth and never broken apart of unsettled together. You're the one person who I admire most.

*huggles you tightly* You're the excellent one.

Thanks for the comment though sisser. ^^

--
-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconagentl:
~agentl Jul 20, 2004, 10:29:47 AM
Awwww, that's so sweet! :hug: And... what poem did you have a copy of? *shifty eyes* I hope it wasn't a bad one. *le twitch*

Luff for joo! :heart:

--
Superman? Here I am.
:iconoh-mesa:
~OH-mesa Jul 20, 2004, 5:03:54 PM
The one from your journal I think. *ponders*

--
-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconagentl:
~agentl Jul 21, 2004, 4:15:59 AM
From my old diaryland diary? Eck... oh well, that's better than some, lol.

--
Superman? Here I am.
:iconoh-mesa:
~OH-mesa Jul 21, 2004, 5:43:20 AM
It was an aweosme one L-ness. Don't worry.. :nod: Yesh everything you write is awesome.. *chuckles* ^^

--
-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
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