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So real.
Shaking.
Why do I feel this way?
Breaking.
Why would I let myself go that far?
Frightened.
I let myself let you be with me.
No regrets.
I’m amazed at the pain.
Enrapturing, beautiful, upsetting.
The sadness only proves what I already knew.
The feelings I had for you.
So deep.
So real.
So painfully right.
And I won’t let myself be angry.
The wonder amazes me.
Together isn’t always perfect.
The light comes from the darkness.
Gentleness, kindness, beauty.
I felt them in your fingertips.
Your lips showed me worlds I’d never known.
Ok.
I understand.
I feel.
I love.
The things that you showed me,
You did to me.
You.
So real.
©2006-2009 ~OH-mesa
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Author's Comments

Wow.. i wrote this today. Right after me and kiel broke up... Yeah. Sadface. But it's ok.

I like it. And he read it and he liked it.
And i like the fact that we're "broken up" but without the not being together... Well, as of now anyway.

Just no more titles or lables.

Just us.

Oh, and Yes, i know he's a hippie. XD But he's a hott, sensative, sweet, hell of a great kisser hippie. ^^

(c) meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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:icontimberwolvesatnj:
ok so why did you break up....???????????

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Brit

stiffen the sinews and summon up the blood...

:stupid: :crazy:
:iconamberine:
I like the way it changes from "Aargh! No!" to "Oh... guess that's allright then."

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Egg!
:iconoh-mesa:
It's complicated. ^^;

--
-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconoh-mesa:
It's more like... DAMNIT! uh... man. To well damnit... but.. ok. ^^

XD

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-mg-

"I don't quite know how to say how I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough.
If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world?"
:iconamberine:
Yeah... something like that. Either way, cool effect.

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Egg!

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